This radio show was pretty good. There were some things that could be stronger. One thing that could be better is when sound effects are used, turn them down a little because it was blaring. Another thing that could be improved is the storyline. It was hard to keep up with the plot because it felt like we were jumping from one thing to the next. Lastly, I loved how you all incorporated some real life facts into your story line. That made it more life-like. Good Job.